can u recheck my essay please dear...

if have a lot of mistakes in grammar particular,please help me 2 correct it back....i want to be smart n clever in english same like u...help me dear,n one day i'll come at there for u...

bismillah....


As racial harmony day draws,it is good time to thimk about what living harmoniously with other racial groups means to you.It may be playing with your Indian friends,helping your chinese friends,celebrating with your Malay friends or teaching your Eurasian friends your own ethnic language.what must we put forward is,racial harmony is when everybody gathered around no matter is any races.Harmony is one of the factor that important to achieve a development.There are many reasons why racial harmony is important in a Malaysia.


Firstly,it can prevent a sivil war.Racial harmony needed for all of community because they dont want the tragedy of 13 Mei returned.On that day,196 people were killed and this crisis was make a bad history impression for community to remind it.After that,if this chaotic situation happen,it can criticize our government for doing programmes to develop a country.For an example,students cannot go to school because unrest situation happen and this may dropped our income of country in a future.


besides that,if our country didn't have racial harmony,nobody wants to visit our country ecspecially a tourist.So,it will decrease the country income and make our country in a crucial problems.Rather than that,our develop nation status will be bad because we cannot fight with other nation country in a good politics and economics.So,it show that,without racial harmony,country are in unstability.


In a conclusion,all side of community must be co-operation,compromise,trust our government and obey the law to make our country peacefull and harmony.So that,we can live together without any problems.


please recheck it for me ya..
ade point yg perlu ditmbh,gtau sy...


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